Wow, I love the turn you took on this, fabulous job, I loved the kind of description you used, outstanding poem, two thumbs up!

Well written! I like your rhymes :)

Well written! I like your rhymes :)

Wel written tori.
A nice optimistic.
From start to end, evry stanza have d lessons we need to learn.
Bt Just abt one thing, i wont agree wid u.
Life isnt a dangerous quest my friend.
Life is beautiful..one jus needs wings to explore its beauty.

Life is lived fuller by the warning signs placed by those who traveled it before you. A fantastic poem with caution as a premise but to never the less live life as its instruction. Beautiful write!