With Red Ink

by Jademark07   May 24, 2013


I refuse to commit
a direct murder.

This paper is your body,
entangled by your own coldness,
impeding you to struggle.

Crumpled.
Now I can hear
the melodramatic crunch
of your breaking bones.

Don't move. You can't
for your limbs are already crippled.

Cut.
Now I can taste
your blood, like rust,
as red as this red ink;
oozing
from your severed veins.

Your hands and legs,
separates from your torso,
as I gently amputate them.

Torn.
Now I can see
your rasping flesh and lacerations;
muscles and organs ripped apart.

And there's your heart,
which I thought never existed,
beating barely.

But, don't worry
for I'll be stitching your wounds,
bringing back
this lot of confetti into a whole

paper--
that is what you are.

You'll be living again
like you have never felt
any excruciating pain,
for I have never been
a torturer nor a murderer,

and you will always be
a cold paper flesh
that garners immortality
from a heart of stone
that sees no unbreakable.

How my pen jots with red ink
will always be a lot better
than how your tongue swings like a

sword, summoning sharp stabbing

words.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    Dare I say that I loved the opening line? It was fantastic and instantly pulls the reader into wanting to read more of the poem.

    I liked the idea of how you fuelled your distaste/dislike for this particular person with a metaphorical dissection of a paper instead of just the usual imagination of causing direct physical hurt to one.

    The message you tried to bring across through this poem was well accomplished by your ending statement. How unfortunate that this is usually a fatal way of hurting someone in our present society.

    I just have two small comments:
    1) I think you meant "this lot of confetti"?
    2) "that sees no unbreakable" - the word unbreakable seems to be misused here, as it is an adjective and you might like to either insert another word behind it or replace "unbreakable" with a noun.

    I liked this piece, good job. Keep writing!

  • 11 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    Sorry, double posting