I love the flow of the poem and i love the darkness also i love that it expresses the feeligns...nicely done Raven 5/5

Demitrius

A Fancifully Written Exquisite Piece Bravo!!!

"The wonders of nautical whimsy" I loved that line. My favorite line of all though is " My Victorian gown, the symbol of my mind,
Grows heavy and dark, faded and wet," so beautifuly written. Its a deep poem, and your words are wonderful. I enjoyed this piece alot. Thank you for sharing. Your a wonderful writter.