Lost love

by Alex   May 24, 2013


Feel the warth inside me
As I turn around I notice your not there warth washs away
Only for it to happen the next day
Are you coming home??

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  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Just a tiny question

    is it warth or wrath?

    As I turn around I notice your not there,
    warth washes away

    ^^ I think on the above line, it would benefit if you take the line wrath washes away... into another line.

    what I understood is that whenever you see this someone you feel anger? and the title is lost love.. so the love ended because this someone might have either cheated or done something else dissapointed you or something but what is clear is that there is no more love.

    • 11 years ago

      by Alex

      Sorry I think I worte and put in up when I was half asleep but uts warmth