When the birds sing

by raymond sawyer   May 24, 2013


For when the sun kiss the blue sky thus there a lovely warm smile yet a warm smile for there love in the air just to see your beautiful face thus you are like a rose that bloom with love every min that one feel your warm smile is like feeling the love from the sun but yet when the birds sing for they sing a song of love that shall touch your heart.

Where there a lonely heart for one want to feel the touch of once beautiful love thus once heart shall beat the sound of love for one been touch with with the sweet sound when the birds sing the song of love that will fill a empty heart with love and yet with a name that so sweet is like a whisper in the night thus for who's heart will feel your love.

When the birds sing thus their song of love shall touch your heart for every star that one wish upon for one shall be your true love yet to touch your heart for one shall touch your heart with his love thus a woman heart need to feel once love in her heart just to watch you smile is like watching the even sun set in the sky of love for when the birds sing.

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  • 11 years ago

    by L

    There are some pretty good lines in here, but perhaps add a bit of punctuation or if not break the poem into lines...

    so the reader can know when to make a pause?

    Otherwise, we just read along the lines without making sense of what we should be paying attention to.

    but what I like is the ending and yes I can feel some love in there.

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