by shannon May 25, 2013
category :
Fun, humor /
relationships
If i was your man and you were my girl i would make sure i lied to you and promised you ve whole world if i came home late i would pretend i stayed at work until a quarter past eight i would do everything in my power to make you believe what was never really in my heart to achieve if i were your man and you where my girl i would make sure i hurt you just like you hurt me i would promise you a life that would be meaningless to me |
by Everlasting
This piece needs some punctuation or to take advantage of line breaks. Other than that, i find it sad... Though I agree with the above comment... it's more of a sardonic piece. I gathered that perhaps, if women switched places with men... I guess they would do the same -.- just to see how they felt? hmm... I guess I could take this piece content into different directions. |
I don't think this is a funny poem, more of a sardonic piece. It has some soul and anger behind it. |