by DarkLight May 25, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Far away I stood to watch, |
by AnnaCG
Heart felt and beautiful! I really liked it. |
by DarkLight
@AnnCaprice thanks |
This is powerful and soothing, I love how you wrote it, wonderful poem, outstanding job, truly tremendous writing, it chocked up my heart, two thumbs up |
by DarkLight
Thanks a lot, u just sunk my heart, n pliz dont let it kill u hehehe |
by Hellon
There is something about this poem that pulls at my heartstrings. It has a raw passion to it that has drawn me into it but...you have a few grammatical errors which can easily be fixed and...and I'd also consider changing the layout slightly if I were you. Has great potential at the moment. |
by DarkLight
Thanks Hellon, i really appreciate that, gramatically please pin point the errors and i will love to do something about, thanks |
by xXxMidnight SoulxXx
Awwwww i LOVE this poem sweetie it really gets my heart going in the pain department email me if you need me i'll be there! 5/5 |
by DarkLight
You so into me girl thanks |