Comments : Blown Ashes

  • 11 years ago

    by xXxMidnight SoulxXx

    Awwwww i LOVE this poem sweetie it really gets my heart going in the pain department email me if you need me i'll be there! 5/5

    Queen Ashlin

    • 11 years ago

      by DarkLight

      You so into me girl thanks

  • 11 years ago

    by Hellon

    There is something about this poem that pulls at my heartstrings. It has a raw passion to it that has drawn me into it but...you have a few grammatical errors which can easily be fixed and...and I'd also consider changing the layout slightly if I were you. Has great potential at the moment.

    • 11 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Thanks Hellon, i really appreciate that, gramatically please pin point the errors and i will love to do something about, thanks

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This is powerful and soothing, I love how you wrote it, wonderful poem, outstanding job, truly tremendous writing, it chocked up my heart, two thumbs up

    • 11 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Thanks a lot, u just sunk my heart, n pliz dont let it kill u hehehe

  • 11 years ago

    by AnnaCG

    Heart felt and beautiful! I really liked it.