Comments : Burn

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I could feel the anger pouring out in here and I think the shortness works better in poems of anger, it gets the exact message across, with a big impact.

    This could be put into many situations, politics, violence, family life, terrorists, many many more.

  • 11 years ago

    by Edward Oropeza

    This piece narrates either to the 2nd party or to the subject itself, it show angers and at the same time being merry in the extent of event to the narrator. Short but direct to the point.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow this is powerful and deep, I loved it, so much anger and emotion, two thumbs up!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Exostosis

    The poem is direct. The author is venting his/her frustration.

    Though one need not tell/command/request the population to carry out destructive actions. As per progression, the symptoms indicate that the human race is bound to destroy itself at some point in the distant future. The structures will collapse under their own weight. Everything is in constant transition towards decay. The pieces fall where they must. It is inevitable.

    Very well written.

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    It sounds to me you are talking about the world rulers if so greatness