by Daylight Lucidity May 26, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
It sank to the bottom of the sea, |
by ThebutterfliesMuse
I agree I think you captured this very well. And your rhyming was great. the imagery was great as well. Its sad what truly happened here though such a tragic event. You write great works. The play in my head haha 5/5 |
Wonderful Job!!! |