by TragicChaos May 27, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I lay upon this shelter floor, its my last night |
This is so powerful and intense, you are obviously a very talented and gifted writer, wonderuf poem, I loved how you write it, I can't wait to read more of your poems, you put so much emotons and heart into this, it really spoke to me and ran into my heart!! |
by Mohan
Its not looks like a first attempt. |
by TragicChaos
This was written as an eye opener. Not all pits have someone who will fight so hard to save them. 90% get put down. I tried to write from the dogs stand point. thats all. Thank you for reading ande being nice enough to leave a comment. |