The title goes perfect with the poem. aside for a few grammatical errors i really enjoyed your poem. you painted the picture perfect. it felt as if i was there watching this all happen and couldn't wait :) |
by TragicChaos
Thank you. I am glad the you enjoyed the poem. It was alot of fun to write, and has become one of my favorites. I will correct the grammar mistakes. Thank you again for the read and the comment :) |