Comments : Reincarnation

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    I absolutely love the last stanza. This poem is full of emotion, which you expressed very well. Strong rhyming, an excellent piece.

    • 11 years ago

      by Vermilion

      Thank you! I actually created the last stanza a few months before the rest of the poem while I was busy with something else. It didn't end up making its way into that, and it seemed to belong here.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    WOW, OMGoodness!!!! Dude that was powerful, ripped my heart out that's for sure! your emotion was being screamed out and I love it! I adore the undead them of it all, really stirred up the readers emotions! And the pain was being flung of your words so immensely, remarkable writing! 100/100, and man if you need to talk to me sometime, you can, I am always here for you!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by savannah

    This last stanza is amazing. I love the ryme and the feel to this poem. its a great poem and the anger oozing out of it is just so overwhelming. 5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by Vermilion

      Thank you! One of my only anger-centric poems. Appreciate the feedback!

  • 11 years ago

    by HeightenedAwareness

    Mmm yes love sweet love it transforms
    and resends.. It has the power to heal
    and kill.. Interesting leaving splatters of
    pain and yet shown within words the
    beauty in ones soul the animal within
    screaming, bleeding without that certain
    someone.. And it's truly beautiful..

    • 11 years ago

      by Vermilion

      Thank you for your awesome feedback! I find your comment quite poetic.