by TragicChaos
Great job! I loved it. I am not a fan of short poems but this wll go on my favorites list. Keep it up :) |
Love love love this! Brimming with imagery and overall the whole essence of sweet unity! Definitely a moment romantics dream about.....can't say much more but great job you two! You work wonders :] |
A lot of good imagery in this. The use of language is what caught me but It took me a few reads to fully understand it as you used a lot of big words lol. |
The free flow and imagery is wonderful and the word choice is outstanding . The poem blends a romantic theme skillfully to make an enjoyable read that almost left me speechless Great collaboration |
This poem is just pure romance. The paradise is the two lovers joining as one, completely wrapped up in each other...a really sensual and passionate piece without being explicit, very lovely. |
by Tara Kay
Together, you both write really well, |