Chills. |
by Lemon
There is a small spelling error "I just wanr to let all the colors of the world pass" should be 'want'. Aside from that, the description that you pour into this is flawless. It's vivid without being crude, gives a really strong sense of pure, raw feeling. |
by TragicChaos
Thank you so much for your kind words. I am glad that you enjoyed this piece. Thank you aso for pointing out the things that I seemed to have looked over when I was posting this. Thank also for the 5/5. :) |
by Burning Angel
This poem is amazing. I absolutely love it. You have so much emotion in the words you use to describe your feelings. |