by Tara Kay
Meme...I love this!!! Oh my, I'm in awe. |
by Meme
Yes I know. Home is a feeling not just a place so its so easy to stray away from it. Lucky are those who can find their way back.. |
by Rusheena
Nice, very nice! The story has an essence of enchantment, or maybe I'm reading too much into it, haha. I love the tone because even though it's dark, it gives you hope that her prayers will be answered and she'll finally find a place to call home. Great work, Meme :) |
I agree completely with what you said, that home isn't a place, it's a feeling. |
by Meme
Thanks hun :) |
by Chelsey
I love this! It almost reminded me of some sort of animal by the use of "straying"....It reminded me of a bird..how they don't really have a specific home..They can build a nest, but if its on someones porch, we knock it down, or in a tree, sometimes the wind blows it out....Funny how similar human feelings can be to the life an animal. |
by Meme
Thanks hon :) |
Awww.. what a great tanka! I love tankas because they're short, but they have to have a lot of meaning and this tanka does... I like how this woman is praying and trying to forgive herself, and trying to find her way back home. It was interesting to read! |