Comments : My scars tell a story

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Not really a poem ...more of just expressing my thoughts......but any comments on how to make it better will be great ....thanks:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Because my scars tell a story.

    the line is so quite, yet so strong. You are using the body in a new way.
    I could have been a metaphore, but this is so much stronger

    You don't call it a poem, but it is for me.

    • 11 years ago

      by Aubrey

      Wow ...thank u:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Sherwin Talapian

    I agree this one is a strong expressing poem great lines and strong words on it i like the 1st line :) great written very well poem you're super good my aubrey :) <3

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Stop using u for you and plz for please...these distract from the honesty and rawness of this piece. I love the title...all scars tell a story if someone cares enough to listen :)