I like the rhyme scheme, I think it works really well with the way you want to explain these women. It really paints this elegant picture and I am sure that is what you were trying to capture.

Any woman would love a poem dedicated to them and this is a pretty good one.

I mean, I think the only thing that I have a slight thing with is vocab. Your other poems use a lot of the same words. Try mixing it up a little bit, it'll capture the reader a lot more.

But still, nicely done.

True any woman would love a poem dedicated to them and you have a way to make them feel not only good but in a way boosts confidence also..another good one!

Enchanting, captivating, you leave the reader full of awe and intrigue with regards to the beauty of the two subjects you so beautifully describe!

Super poem !

Beautifully crafted sonnet!!! But I am some what puzzled to see that you call this an Ode.. :)
I have read some of your poems and I must say you are truly a master of love sonnets.. :)

I truly admire the way you reach out through words. What a man say, says much about the man. You have so much lover for written words and it reflect the soul you have within. It's a long time i haven't red one of your poem, but here i am again. Nice wording as usual.

Love it

Very lucky ladies to have such a delicately beautiful piece dedicated to them.
Very lovely piece.

such expression.. I can say, i am in love with your writing.