This poem is cute. However, I can't tell if some places are sarcastic or all of it is. But, maybe that is due to me not knowing you. In the case where you speak of Achilles, I assumed you were speaking of the Greek Achilles with the heel and such. Perhaps I am not understanding, as I said, because I don't know you, but he is brutal. After he killed Hector, he dishonored him by dragging him around in his chariot through the dirt and kept Hector's body from his family -- I'm not sure what part one would welcome of his mentality, appearance or fashion sense. Haha, that's why I'm having difficulty with this poem. Clarification would be helpful..

Good job!
-z

Ok, I will take that into consideration. thank so much for your feedback