The imagery in this piece was haunting, it brought me to tears, just the thought alone made my heart convulse, I really felt this piece, and it felt deep and personal, which made the emotion really strong and powerful.

I can relate, and well, the whole thought process of suicide, the first thoughts, you know, I get that and this was just one of those poems that moved me, shook me.

It was smooth, and raw, the flow was absolutely exceptional, and the tone and the darkness and the sadness and emotion, everything about this was pure mastery, really amazing write...

MA, This tore through me.

Love and hugs
xx

I'm very surprised that this poem hasn't had more readers... it is completely just, I can't even think of a right word. It has that creepy haunting feeling, with the fact that someone committed suicide there years ago... to the evident sadness of wanting to do the same thing.

You captured such a story, that woman's story of jumping off the empire, the 86th floor and how many have came and gone to view it.. and then along with your story of craving the leap.

Adding this to my favorites!!! I'm usually not fond of suicidal writes, but this one touched me in a place that I forgot about...so I'll be back to read this masterpiece a few times more than I should lol.

<3 <3 <3