I think the shortness of this poem really intensifies the meaning. It's a quick thought to a huge future ahead with the person loved.

Nice.

It flows beautifully :) I love it.

Elegantly worded... It really just flows right off the tongue.

One thing though. As people have pointed out to me, haikus are about nature :p

Senyrus follow the same style but are about anything.

Hate to be a pick about that but it is better coming from a friend before someone else does it :p

Lovely.