by Kate
I like the connection between moonlight and starlight. It really helps pain a picture of night time. Also keeps the poem tight and on point. |
by Lemon
Wow! Beautiful haiku with a sense of hope through "Love can be worth all the pain". You've created a beautiful setting, I picture a beautiful serene night hung with stars, with a light breeze in the air when I read this. You have haiku talent, amigo :) |