Comments : Captured in Starlight

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    I like the connection between moonlight and starlight. It really helps pain a picture of night time. Also keeps the poem tight and on point.

    It is beautiful. Love poems like this are your best. You're good at them :)

    I also like the message about love being worth all of the pain.

    Beautiful.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lemon

    Wow! Beautiful haiku with a sense of hope through "Love can be worth all the pain". You've created a beautiful setting, I picture a beautiful serene night hung with stars, with a light breeze in the air when I read this. You have haiku talent, amigo :)