Comments : It's You

  • 11 years ago

    by anand singh

    I breathe you in each breeze that's passing,
    aAbsorb you in each ray,
    You begin all my tomorrows,
    And you will end each day...This stanza speaks for itself of the overwhelming love you portrayed in this beautifully penned piece.An enjoyable read.

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    The last stanza does say it all and how lucky that woman is to have all that love wrapped around her..another enjoyable read :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Ditto Paul and Meena.

    Awesome flow, beautiful words.