Scribbles

by Beautiful Chaos   Jun 3, 2013


I almost touched it
That place inside
Where you hide
Where you chew
And eat through my pride
Where you feast and speak
Of my beast
Where you lick and drink
Of love's feast

I almost lost them
Innocent dreams
Fear filled screams
Where you live
And bathe in my streams
My lusty yet sensual schemes

Magic
Both good and bad
It bleeds through this skin when it's sad
It slides through my senses
And over my fences
It drives me as though I were mad

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  • 11 years ago

    by Richard S

    You just keep getting better and better.

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judge Comment:

    Perfect piece here by Beautiful Chaos!!

    I can't express enough how the rhyme scheme helps this chaotic masterpiece come to life.

    Scribbles in the mind remind me of a graffiti painting, scratches on a frustrated thought. Etching memories and scattered moments leave me d angling in love with this poem. Its fresh, dark, descriptive and fashionable fresh!!

    Explosive ending to a poem that has a rhythmic flow all on its own. Powerful piece!!

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Judging comment Weekly Contest June 17, 2013

    I wasn't keen to the title of this poem nor to the poem as a whole, but after reading it for about five times. Funny, I started liking it. It has this mystery that itches me to find out what that place is call. The way the lines are broken and the rhymes makes the poem interesting to read. I like it, and at the end of the day this one of the poems that I remembered. Scribbles, ironic! they are hard to decipher so I guess that's why this poem is title like such. Oh and I also feel the emotion in this piece. Well done.

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Judging comment Weekly Contest June 17, 2013

    I wasn't keen to the title of this poem nor to the poem as a whole, but after reading it for about five times. Funny, I started liking it. It has this mystery that itches me to find out what that place is call. The way the lines are broken and the rhymes makes the poem interesting to read. I like it, and at the end of the day this one of the poems that I remembered. Scribbles, ironic! they are hard to decipher so I guess that's why this poem is title like such. Oh and I also feel the emotion in this piece. Well done.

  • 11 years ago

    by faded flowers

    Tapping out the rhythm to this poem already makes me intrigued. Such a dark yet somehow innocent poem; I adore it. :)

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