Great poem love it

And I hate it when you run away. here is one line that I dont like the word And in. It takes away from the poem.

Otherwise... its hard when you cant be with your love all the time.. its hard when you feel alone and rejected and you portrayed it well in this poem. We all want second chances. When you give your heart to anyone its your walls that go down. I love how the writer is so sad and the reader can feel her pain and in the end we all hope she can be with her love again and be together forever... happily ever after like a prince and princess. Wonderful read. 5.