When you are able to write something that was inspired by a song, or story or entire album in this case, sometimes it's difficult to capture the reader because they may not be familiar with it, or see it the way you have...but this piece, it told a story, that was somewhat haunting and sad at the same time.

The flow wasn't too smooth at the end, and that kind of threw me when reading, but the rhymes were believable and not too forced, which was good.

I liked this piece, good write.
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