Comments : Tonight Sweetheart

  • 11 years ago

    by elizabeth

    This is beautiful simply amazing dont ever stop writing

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Your words could melt an iceberg William. This is beyond beautiful, I have missed your writings and the awesome rhyme and flow is always right on track.

    Oh how I love to read your poetry, but am unable to nominate from the love section, unless you want to move it momentarily to another section. I believe this poem has a good chance in the contest, if it can get there.

    Great penning!

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Let me soothe all your pain,
    Diminish all your fears,
    Confide in me your deepest hurt,
    So I may dry your tears.

    ^^This stanza stands out for me. The whole write is a warm read yet that stanza is a very supportive statement..liked it.