Beautiful illustration throughout this poem. You really painted a picture for the reader where it is very simple to create the imagery within this poem. I loved your use of vocabulary and the different metaphors you used to explain love and loss. Well written.

Thanks Lune, once again for the comments, priceless they are, thanks !

Again another brilliant piece by you.

I love the line 'i wish I knew I'd lost you the moment I found you.' Now wouldn't that be good to save all the heartache?

Take care,Em