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by Meena Krish
Just wanted to point out somethings: Life is neva something we decide, ^^Just wanted to point out the word neva is never. what's their to control? ^^What's there to control instead their. As we breath, walk, eat and sleep. It's right their! ^^There is a 'e' missing in breath and the line It's right there- instead of their. a better tomorrow, and samehow we lose the joy of now ^^A typo, samehow-somehow. So i pray you learn to laugh so hard that ^^So I pray.. Overall, it's a good message for any reader. Life is to be lived and not allow sorrow take over one's heart..good going friend :)
by Yatubeera Resty
For sua, after seeing your correction do i realise what is, bless you dear for the correction
by WintersAngel
Great poem!!