Comments : Simply live

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Just wanted to point out somethings:

    Life is neva something we decide,

    ^^Just wanted to point out the word neva is never.

    what's their to control?

    ^^What's there to control instead their.

    As we breath, walk, eat and sleep. It's right their!

    ^^There is a 'e' missing in breath and the line It's right there- instead of their.

    a better tomorrow, and samehow we lose the joy of now

    ^^A typo, samehow-somehow.

    So i pray you learn to laugh so hard that

    ^^So I pray..

    Overall, it's a good message for any reader. Life is to be lived and not allow sorrow take over one's heart..good going friend :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Yatubeera Resty

    For sua, after seeing your correction do i realise what is, bless you dear for the correction

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Great poem!!