Comments : Blue Guitar

  • 11 years ago

    by Edward Oropeza

    There is so much about dreams can tell us, it makes us fool, riddled and puzzled...but the good thing is, we can make everything in a dreams that a real world cannot afford for us.
    good work, a little suggestion

    "But if it is just a lie means
    who playing the music?"

    maybe you mean "who is playing the music?" with a question mark,since I figured it out that you are defining about the non-existent event.

  • 11 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    Awesome!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tim

    Hi Mohan. Just wanted to stop by and say that I really like this piece. :)

    But I did also pick up on what Edwards said. either "who is." or "who" as a question, would would better.
    And also the "un logical" is maybe "illogical"??

    Other than that, great penning.

    Well done

    Tim