When the broken girl writes

Yaki, I absolutely loved reading this and feeling the passion every step of the way! I adore the simple repetition and how in each stanza you introduce more ways that this whole "all or nothing" concept defines itself....I so agree with everything you express- you know if we limit ourselves in our writing, only give what we think others will want to hear, then we're not pouring our soul out and portraying all our pain, happiness, emotions...We need to give everything fully because in that way we can reach who we truly are.

Very inspirational! That last line is so true, there is nothing "wrong" in a way a person writes....even with technical errors, if the author intended it, they did. No one can say they are doing it poorly.
Love ya :]

Oh Yaki, did you just reach inside my head and pull out what I was thinking??!
Of course not, you penned this before I even thought about a rate that I got on a poem, a poem that just took everything out of me to write, that is deeply personal and then without knowing why, was giving a 4, which I know I shouldn't even be cross about or annoyed because to be honest, I think everything I write is crap, so I don't get why it got to me to be honest, anyway, enough rambling...

I loved this...you're a strong woman, and you write some amazing poetry, and you know it!
x

But at
least she pour her feeling down on paper