As I was reading this, I was thinking, sometimes the least said is the most powerful because I felt this hidden suffering in your poem, and that nothing more can be expressed than the reality of that silence and stillness. If this was written truthfully in your life or someone close to you, I'm very sorry, whether you lost anyone or just the trauma of being in an accident. I've never experienced that. But I can taste almost your numbness in this, how you are left alone and that fear comes rushing back... |