Comments : When im gone

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Breaks my heart....im sorry Sherwin ....I hope it work out for u....but no matter what's happen .....what problems u may have.....stay true to urself......be who u are .....because no matter what throws at u....u can always over come it.....im here for u ....but if not...I understand ....ur a wonderful poet.....so don't give up on it....

    Love always-Aubrey

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      :( ... thanks for everything.. and i don't have any problems, my only problem is only you... and i won't change my mind to leave my acc. i think i'll continue to write poems... in my note... and

      thanks aubrey for the love that i didn't felt...

  • 11 years ago

    by Karla

    It broke my heart too. Lovely piece.Take care!

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Thanks madam... :) but please don't ove think of it... it's just a poem ... but again thanks... :)

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Kinda sad, but great poem. Your emotions shine very strong in this piece :) awesome write from an awesome poet!

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Aw.... an awesome poet ? thanks... but i don't think i deserve that tittle... super thanks madam.... :)

  • 11 years ago

    by dindee

    Sherwin....since when you're broken???haha...all i know is...charaan... you break them...bleee......lol...

    bahala ka dyan...

    Nambola ka nnmn sa mga comment nila???
    hahahaha...lagot ka...

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Grabe naman pla yun... d nman ako nambobola ah... saka d ako palekero..pala kaibigan lang po ako... dinz...

      stick to one lang ako. kaso wala pa nga eh.... malas lang...

  • 11 years ago

    by dindee

    Stick to one????or play and stick no one???hahahaha...peace.....wala daw....my sideline ka dto eh...share na....whos she?

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Grabe wala naman talaga saka hindi nga ako ganun... eh wala naman talaga mga close friends ko lang un mga un... ung c cathy lang niligawan ko dito wala ng iba... grabe... judgemental mo ah...

      saka d ako nag sasabing GF ko cla... kasi mahirap na... long distance tpos GF ko sila ? mahirap... yung rono... close friend ko lang ask mo pa s'ya... yung EHU GIRL super friend means nun... yung aubrey hindi ko po gf un close friend ko lang din po promise... wala po akong gf....

  • 11 years ago

    by dindee

    Hahahaha...really?? si hannah lizzete??you court her???ano basted ka??

    ahhhh...inedit mu???? sbi mu knina c lizzette ngaun si cathy???or both...?

    sherwin!!!share na,,,grupo...hahaha

  • 11 years ago

    by AppleChaz

    Although you don't dedicate it to anyone, this writing is definitely can be related by many of others. Most of the times, the person we need is not there and they will realize it only after it's too late... 5/5.