Nicely written. awesome poem. i like your expression, and your thought.

Ohhhhh this is so deeep and touched my heart,, you wrote this fabulously, outstanding poem, you wrote it perfectly, two thumbs up!!!

I love the way you expressed yourself in this poem. It was so deep, and touching. Thumbs up! 5/5! I loved it!

I like the way this poem was written, simple in some ways, the flow in my opinion is good, this one is great for those times when you just wanna enjoy some easy reading and stuff, kinda gloomy though, but eh, real good nonetheless. All in all, like I've said before, I like it.

Very nicely written!! The flow is good, as well as the rhyming scheme.