Really clever.

You're a bit cruel! :P

But good poem. :) - Maybe if i was being a little nick picky, I'd say you could space the poem out a little better, so it's easier to read. But otherwise, great!

5/5

Keep Penning,
Tim

You're a bit cruel! :P

But good poem. :) - Maybe if i was being a little nick picky, I'd say you could space the poem out a little better, so it's easier to read. But otherwise, great!

5/5

Keep Penning,
Tim

Haha...