by Daylight Lucidity Jun 9, 2013
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Have you ever felt like you shouldn't feel the way you do? |
by BlueJay
I don't understand why there are no comments here yet, this piece is excellent. Though I have to say the second bit is my favorite. Its very well written, with massive emotion and skill. Thevflow is interesting and the style is nice. I like the word choice and how it doesn't feel like it was polished timevand time again, raw rough poems are sometimes the best there are. |