Comments : Three Words, Three Tears

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I don't understand why there are no comments here yet, this piece is excellent. Though I have to say the second bit is my favorite. Its very well written, with massive emotion and skill. Thevflow is interesting and the style is nice. I like the word choice and how it doesn't feel like it was polished timevand time again, raw rough poems are sometimes the best there are.

    Great job