by Samuel Ernst Jun 10, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
You once said you'd always have my back, |
by anand singh
This is a beautiful piece penned with deep emotions and very realistic I must say. |
by Burning Angel
This is a really amazing piece. You have alot of emotion and the way you use your words really hits hard and lets the reader know everything that you are feeling. |
I'm sorry if this is true, and I hope you're able to cope with it. Sometimes I feel as though when someone leave us we often feel ourselves at certain places we developed memories with them, so I find the bar to be quite fitting here in that aspect, it reminds you of what you had yet making you upset about it at the same time. I can see you wanting to forget about everything yet at the same time willing to give a second chance & forgive for what they've done. Sometimes we have to feel selfish though to get over the immediate hurt we feel. Like I said I hope you aren't going through this but in case you are I hope everything gets better soon! |
by WintersAngel
Great piece. I love the rhythm to it. Excellent flow as well. |