Great piece. I love the rhythm to it. Excellent flow as well.

I'm sorry if this is true, and I hope you're able to cope with it. Sometimes I feel as though when someone leave us we often feel ourselves at certain places we developed memories with them, so I find the bar to be quite fitting here in that aspect, it reminds you of what you had yet making you upset about it at the same time. I can see you wanting to forget about everything yet at the same time willing to give a second chance & forgive for what they've done. Sometimes we have to feel selfish though to get over the immediate hurt we feel. Like I said I hope you aren't going through this but in case you are I hope everything gets better soon!

This is a really amazing piece. You have alot of emotion and the way you use your words really hits hard and lets the reader know everything that you are feeling.

Great Write

This is a beautiful piece penned with deep emotions and very realistic I must say.
An enjoyable read.