Comments : Audacity Day

  • 11 years ago

    by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

    Amazing poem brother. it is true we as a people have to raise ourselves up and bull ourselves up by our bootstraps. we are on this Earth to help each other and can't do that with a NWO. We don't need that we only need each other.

    I know the silence of this night
    will be broken at midnight.
    The steel grey tears start to
    stream down my face, matching
    the metal bars that won't protect me

    On Audacity Day.....

    by far this hit me the most. not even the metal bars will protect you, and tears running down your face. i can see that clearly, because other people in different nations go through that daily. even in history like the night of broken glass in germany during ww2 reflects exactly what you are talking about.

    loved your piece Drew :)