Comments : The verb in the infinity

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Wonderful as always, Powerfully visual and emotionally stimulating. I would be lying if I said I understood what it means exactly but so is the beauty of your poetry. I love this unique write. I only wish I knew the true interpretation. :)
    XX

  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Phenomenal

  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Love it love your poem, you are great and the titel is great

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Karla, I always come to read your work with expectation of something fascinating, and you NEVER let me down. Your writing is so unique, and probably the only poetry I can't ever seem to properly comment on.

    I LOVED the details in this piece. Your wording of 'the verb in the infinity' so creative.....incorporating nature...oh man, that is my favorite in love poems.

    Such a soothing write for the mind. excellent.

  • 11 years ago

    by Britt

    Judging comment:

    What a gorgeous love poem. I have read this so many times, and I have to say my favorite part is how Karla incorporated nature into the piece. So simple, yet complex, as nature often is (as is love). This was such an easy read, flowing right off the tongue with beauty. I really liked how she brought the hunter/deer in from the beginning to close it up. An odd pairing in love but realistically they share the love of outdoors so it made sense. Compassion and passion for something/someone is a strong feeling. That last stanza has me in awe.. such a poetic beauty. I can't stop reading this poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judge Comment:

    This week I was truly drawn to creativity and unique depth in my poetry selections this week, and Karla's poem "The verb in the infinity" is at the top of my list!!

    Truly a creative, delicate and emotion love poem. Karla awed me with her deep and in depth word usage, capturing her inner beauty and mixing it within. This piece shows strength to carry on, the ability to rise above a broken heart perhaps, as well as adding a mystical and magical flare, which is one of the many things I adore about this piece.

    "Life dances in me every single day
    and my nakedness opens closed doors.
    When nothing I have,
    I still have myself,
    I still have our mountains and there
    hunters and deers have only one heart."

    I want to highlight this portion of the last stanza because it holds such a powerful meaning and what it means to be comfortable and ok with being single perhaps... Such a beautiful and creative way to describe such positive emotions-

    I can't stay enough about this poem, Karla has made me speechless with this piece, well done!