Comments : Trying to walk in beauty

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This is so powerful Karla...it is so hard trying to live in this world, and everywhere we turn, there seems to be people more beautiful than us, but we are all beautiful, and we must believe that,
    I love the reference to Lord Byron, it added how the beauty of what we write sometimes is shaded and overshadowed, and cast aside, because everything and everyone is beautiful, inside, there is so much more than what is on the surface.

    This piece, just really touched me, and I like how you spoke about the end being your beginning, that every write, is the start of another, how every day ends, and another begins, that time, when everything is continuing, and we still have to try.

    Love this!

  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Karla
    If my arms was long enough I would give you a hug for this.
    You make me feel good

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Nice write Karla :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I really love this poem. You done a great job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Victoria

    Meanwhile I will be busy leaving and living. The end is my beginning.------LOVE!,!!!!