Comments : Delicate

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow this is so beautiful, I love it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    This one is very beautifully written...Heres where I was pulled in.....

    In your eyes, I find something to hold on to.
    I promised you that I would never leave
    The very thought of it squeezes my heart
    And I hope that I can give you relief
    As I try to protect you, precious, from harm.
    Every time I have the pleasure of talking to you
    My heart skips beats every so often
    And no matter what I do,
    You always seem to be on my mind.
    I place a soft kiss on your forehead
    Even if it is only friendship
    I know that this time, opening up my heart is worth it
    And it's amazing loving someone so delicate.

    I still can not nominate Love poems or else I would.

    Write on.

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    This is beautiful. You pulled me in from the first line and hooked me. I love the feelings like this. It truly is amazing to love someone delicate and who has a place in your heat 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by onethuscome

    'ONLY FRIENSHIP"?...ahh..not the way I read this.uh uh.someones in love!

  • 11 years ago

    by onethuscome

    'ONLY FRIENSHIP"?...ahh..not the way I read this.uh uh.someones in love!

  • 11 years ago

    by onethuscome

    'ONLY FRIENSHIP"?...ahh..not the way I read this.uh uh.someones in love!

  • 11 years ago

    by onethuscome

    'ONLY FRIENSHIP"?...ahh..not the way I read this.uh uh.someones in love!

  • 11 years ago

    by Mona

    The poem slightly comes across as cheesy however, there are some amazing phrases thrown in!

    Keep up the good work (: