Comments : Tell Me Why

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Hmm a lot of emotion in this. Definitely a lot.

    There are a few spelling errors in this poem so I would go back and look into it.

    Don't you think it is a little early to say those words? I mean, I don't doubt that you feel it but yeah.

    And you have to consider the person and the words. Maybe he has been through a lot and those words scare him more than anything else. If you keep assuming that he doesn't care for you then it is only going to ruin what you have or start an argument.

    Relax.

    • 11 years ago

      by CathyButterflyJC

      Thank you I know you are right, i just feel lost because he used to say them all the time while I was the one afraid of the words, then all of a sudden he stops and pretty much stops talking to me too but thank you for the comment that helps a lot

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This is really deep , you might want to add a bit of punctuation, love and infatuation are two different things and I believe it's over used all over the world.

    To sit down a talk through it is the only
    Option , good piece

  • 11 years ago

    by Tim

    Great Piece :) bless your heart.

    I hope writing this piece has helped you understand something about the world. - Good luck

    Keep Penning

    Tim

  • 11 years ago

    by Jeraun Terre

    I love it....very emotional and I think if you love a person you should tell them I love you often. People do like to hear those words especially from a loved one.

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Awww...your just one of those people ...when u get hurt i want to smacks someone...im sorry but its true...your a kind loving soul and i hate to see you hurt....hugs....but im here for you...hugs....great poem 5/5