Try Mercy

Sometimes we describe alot in few words. and your poem is one of those poem. it was great and so kind. very soft and merciful words your wrote here. anyone feels safe calm and peace while reading this poem. excellent piece of work.

Mind Soothing piece. It seems more like a prayer, a pleasing one and gives out a lot of positivity and hope.

Great write!

Keep writing:)

I hardly see religious poems written on this site, they're very few. I'm happy to have read this. Its different, nurturing to the mind heart and soul as well as inspiring. One can also connect with the spirit of piety in the piece. Very well written, short but the magnitude of the power of Gods mercy is evident; overwhelming and peaceful.

The message you conveyed is clear like the stars.
To me it delves on mans beliefs, convictions, fate, faith and sins. I believe there's The Most High whom is the creator and architect of all that exist in this universe. From humans to animals, to Angels to Jinns and all those spectacular mountains, trees, oceans, flowers et al. He oversees all that's happening and He's the 'All-Knower'. His holy books states doctrines for us to follow, to make life easy and rewarding to us.

Only when we choose to accept what He'd decreed in our lives, then can we have peace of mind. We may pray for what we want; our desires but He knows what's the best for us; our needs and that's what he grants us. If only we listen to His words, life is moulded in such a way we're on a journey to our final destination, till then we use what we're bestowed to make the best of life and find our purpose in life. Hence carving our path to the hereafter with our deeds on earth.

We need to love Him, He should be our first love, then we can emanate love to ourselves and neighbors. Until you learn to forgive one another so as to co-exist in peace and harmony, no mercy shall shroud one. And we should always have it at the back of our mind a day will come when He'll unite everyone under His umbrella of mercy.

This is just like the cooling breeze, makes one feel serene and reflect about life and God.
Beautifully penned!