Really good! This poem seems very... Relatable. 5/5

Very sad and heartbreaking piece.. I could feel your emotions here as you compare your present with your past and also show the new path of life which has welcomed you to sadness and agony. Loved the detailed words you used to describe every
bit of the emotion..

Amazing!!

Keep writing:)

I can feel the emotion in this. i enjoy the way you wrote it with the flow it has. i can relate to whe words you have written. strong write

We all have our paths to walk and I am glad you shared yours with us.