Love Beat

by Sherwin Talapian   Jun 16, 2013


Tug Tug Tug Tug
My Heart says
when you're near.
when you're not
it says clear.

Tug Tug Tug Tug
touch it and feel the heat
come closer, use your ear.
hear and feel the beat
do you hear ?
do you feel ?
it says four words.
I Love You Girl
how do you feel ?

Tug Tug Tug Tug
come closer girl
cos i wanted to hear.
the love beat
the best sound.
the best rhythm
in my ear.

June 16, 2013
Sherwin Talapian

correct me if im wrong... please thanks

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  • 11 years ago

    by dindee

    Eh TUG TUG??????its not..

    you put there..."correct me if im wrong... please thanks"

    with matching please...so i corrected you....
    you must edit your poem so i wont correct you....hahahaha...

    bleee...

  • 11 years ago

    by dindee

    Uyh...LUB DUB is the sound of the heart....

    LUB for the closure of atrioventricular valve...

    and DUB for semilunar valves....

    char!!!!

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Grabe pati yun cnita... :( luv dub parang hindi naman ? kasi inirhyme ko po sya kaya ganun... like what i said sorry i wrote what i feel so i wrote it thanks for the comment :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice and rhymic also

  • 11 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice and rhymic also

  • 11 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice and rhymic also

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