by Ale
Oh, that was a good poem. It's good you've written another poem. Hope to hear more! |
by Tim
Thanks for the comment aye. :) I stopped coming here years ago and just returned... I will post anything I write from now on. And will get round to writing that about me too lol. |
by ThebutterfliesMuse
Life is a struggle and you penned your feelings well. I love the expression you take when you say nothing will stop you from getting to the person you want. 5/5 |
by Tim
Thanks mate, it means a lot... I'm glad you like it. I do like to show my attitude within my writing, so its great that you picked up on it, means im doing something right.... I will try and keep up to date with the stuff you write. |
by Kate
Again, I like the theme. Games and all. Nice. |
by Tim
:) I'm glad you mentioned that actually. The out was there initially, but I wasn't surebif it made the line too long or not... think I have a phobia of lines being irregular lengths, I should get over this. Haha. |
Very nice.. I enjoyed this very much |