Raindrops Falling.....

by Dreamofolwin   Jun 16, 2013


Raindrops falling all around
lips caressing with no bounds.
Delicious, inviting wanting more
as raindrops gently start to pour...

Down heated bodies fervently,
a passion arising, steadily.
This moment in the mind is sketched
A pleasure sweet, ne're to forget.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    this poem requires an 'XXX' rating!

    Seriously, the use of rainfall and passion works well together. I also like the old style feel to the last line with the word 'ne'er'

    I'm off for a cold shower now! :O)

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Mayday

    Oh this is good ^__^

    The flow - the choice of words and the imagery -
    Nicely done. :D

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely. A wonderful write with a flawless rhyme scheme which I love.
    Well done and all the best,
    Ben

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Excellent description leads to marvelous imagery. Great write.

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This poem has a lot of room for the mind to imagine about! Rain does create a feeling and atmosphere which makes one to act in so many ways :) Nice read!

    Good job on the challenge!

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