A short scene painted with a few words.
I like that the poem is discreet yet it allows the mind to wander in between each falling raindrop...

This poem has a lot of room for the mind to imagine about! Rain does create a feeling and atmosphere which makes one to act in so many ways :) Nice read!

Good job on the challenge!

Excellent description leads to marvelous imagery. Great write.

Lovely. A wonderful write with a flawless rhyme scheme which I love.
Well done and all the best,
Ben

Oh this is good ^__^

The flow - the choice of words and the imagery -
Nicely done. :D

5/5

Hello,

this poem requires an 'XXX' rating!

Seriously, the use of rainfall and passion works well together. I also like the old style feel to the last line with the word 'ne'er'

I'm off for a cold shower now! :O)

Take care,

Michael